Comments on: Five Tips For Making Sure Your Screenplay Has Commercial Potential https://smartg.com/screenwriter/five-tips-for-making-screenplay-commercial/ (818) 907-6511 • smartgirls@smartg.com Mon, 24 Oct 2022 05:18:23 +0000 hourly 1 By: Timothy McCarthy https://smartg.com/screenwriter/five-tips-for-making-screenplay-commercial/#comment-5099 Thu, 08 Aug 2019 19:54:40 +0000 http://smartg.com/screenwriters/?p=85#comment-5099 I often think of A listers who would fit for TAKIN’ BACK THE STREETS. But
then I look at their film schedules and see they are unavailable for two years or so. Nevertheless, I think I have reachable people in mind. Tim

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By: admin https://smartg.com/screenwriter/five-tips-for-making-screenplay-commercial/#comment-5098 Sat, 04 Apr 2015 19:25:12 +0000 http://smartg.com/screenwriters/?p=85#comment-5098 In reply to Jeff McMahon.

Thanks, Jeff.

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By: Jeff McMahon https://smartg.com/screenwriter/five-tips-for-making-screenplay-commercial/#comment-5097 Tue, 03 Mar 2015 22:31:02 +0000 http://smartg.com/screenwriters/?p=85#comment-5097 Sound advice – have read similar before but not as succinct as this. Thanks

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By: admin https://smartg.com/screenwriter/five-tips-for-making-screenplay-commercial/#comment-5096 Wed, 04 Feb 2015 07:16:19 +0000 http://smartg.com/screenwriters/?p=85#comment-5096 In reply to Jack McCabe.

Hi Jack,

These may or may not be “high-concept.” Think of high-concept as easy to repeat the nature of the story — a story which revolves around a major idea or concept. Distinct from a story that you have to dig into and explain or tell the narrative of the story to. Even though most stories are not high concept, there are still things that everyone can do to help make their script more commercial, starting with these listed here.

Thanks for bringing the term up. That term is mysterious for a lot of people…. even inside the industry people see it differently!

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By: admin https://smartg.com/screenwriter/five-tips-for-making-screenplay-commercial/#comment-5095 Wed, 04 Feb 2015 07:06:15 +0000 http://smartg.com/screenwriters/?p=85#comment-5095 In reply to Marcus Pidek.

Hi Marcus,

Great point. And I can definitely understand why it’s confusing. It’s like with anything in marketing, it has to “fit” somewhere. From a new writer, it’s extremely unlikely that they’re going to take something really different from you. The films Avatar and The Matrix were films by two of the biggest names in the business — Joel Silver and James Cameron.

And no something really different attracting audiences. Audiences are far more reliable to come back for very similar (but a little different) films. Think of how many re-makes and franchises we get. Think of how a movie star has to be attached to a Hollywood film for it to be made. That’s because the audiences want the same thing…. with a little variation. Audiences want the reliability of an actor they like.

And think of all of the genre films…. same story over and over with a little variation.

You’re question is a valid one, “what’s too different?” But I would approach it slightly differently. I highly recommend that you try to write a script in a traditional format first…. a genre type film that follows the beats, but has a twist on the story. Genres have been around for a long time and work for a reason. Try to get really good at one of them first — writing the genre with a twist on a story. If you do that, you won’t be too different. But the challenge on that is to come up with a hook that’s different for the story that fits the genre.

For kicks, here are a couple of things that are too different and are mistakes: Having a voice-over narration that doesn’t belong to anyone in the world of that story. Submitting a 300 page script…. that’s too different. A lot of examples that I could give are just plain bad writing…. not that they are too different. And of course, if a big shot VIP filmmaker gets inspired enough…. all bets are off…. However, they have developed more of an intuitive sense of what will appeal to audiences, so their “really different idea,” would probably be a better guess than most people would make.

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By: Marcus Pidek https://smartg.com/screenwriter/five-tips-for-making-screenplay-commercial/#comment-5094 Wed, 31 Dec 2014 21:45:44 +0000 http://smartg.com/screenwriters/?p=85#comment-5094 Hi! Thanks for the tips. There are so many things you could’ve said and to limit your choice to 5 must have been a head-scratcher. I’m sure you know your job but I have to say that #4 – If it is TOO DIFFERENT, you’re probably wasting your time. – surprised me. I get it, don’t get too weird because Hollywood wants the same, only different. So, I’m curious, were movies like Avatar and Matrix and you could name many more, not really that different? Aren’t breakout films, the surprises, often the best shots at surprising and attracting audiences? And inspiring franchises? I’m just feeling that if we play safe, there’s a chance we’ll be boring. Where is the middle way in this one? I wish there were 5 tips on what’s too different. If you have a thought on this would you mind emailing me a line? Thanks again for your time.

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