Comments on: Where Are You Going With Your Plot?

By: Ron Kattawar

Ron Kattawar — Mon, 24 Nov 2014 18:50:29 +0000

Melody, I treasure the tidbits of advice you post. Every one has been helpful and thoughtfully applied. I do have a script that I would like your opinion on. Frankly, I’m not sure if it is feasible to pursue since I’ve written it using another author’s characters. My sequel to “Steel Magnolias” was originally intended as an exercise to find a female voice. Not an easy feat considering I’m not a female and certainly do not profess to understand the opposite sex. The results, at least from my perspective is the story actually turned out much better than I thought it may. In fact I believe the story is a worthy venture and did offer me a better insight to the female voice.
I’m not sure if it is a service you offer, that is, reading, evaluating and giving your opinion, but if it is, I would appreciate your consideration and a fair price for that service.
Thank you,
Ron Kattawar
Southaven, Ms….Home to John Grisham
ps a copy of “Velvet Lies” is presently in transit to Robert Harling via a friend.

By: Pieter

Pieter — Sat, 15 Nov 2014 09:01:47 +0000

Great info it make sense

Thanks

Pieter

By: Laurie

Laurie — Sun, 23 Feb 2014 23:28:10 +0000

Thanks for the helpful hints! I have just finished 30 pages. I am hoping to have it done by May! I think that your critique will be very helpful when I am finished.

By: grant

grant — Thu, 18 Jul 2013 12:51:54 +0000

Great stuff, I enjoy reading your page every time . Thank you.
Grant

By: Ampofo Baah Ernest

Ampofo Baah Ernest — Mon, 17 Sep 2012 10:12:53 +0000

I really love this, thank you.

By: admin

admin — Wed, 15 Dec 2010 23:34:02 +0000

In reply to Greg Moran. Hey, Greg, How are you? That sounds very interesting. Of course, I love all the mythology. And ultimately, at the heart of every mythology is the story that is an external representation of the internal processes of the human psyche. The great thing about stories set back when is that they tap into the timeless parts of our hearts and soul. I look forward to working with you, Greg. Meanwhile, have a fabulous holiday!