Is Your Screenplay Dragging, Confusing, or Too Short? Check Its Central Question

In this blog post, I want to address one of the problems I see frequently in screenplays: the story wanders around, runs too long, feels too short, or leaves the reader unclear about where it is going.

Sometimes the individual ingredients are perfectly respectable. There may be an interesting protagonist, several good scenes, some sharp dialogue, and a premise with real potential. Yet the screenplay as a whole does not come together.

It is a little like having excellent musicians who are all performing different songs. Individual moments may sound good, but they do not add up to one satisfying experience.

One of the first things I check when deciding how to fix a screenplay like this is whether it has established a strong central dramatic question.

What Is the Central Dramatic Question?

The central dramatic question is the primary question the story asks and ultimately answers.

Whenever possible, it should be simple enough to answer yes or no:

  • Will they find the killer?
  • Will the couple end up together?
  • Will the hero survive?
  • Will the mission succeed?
  • Will the family be reunited?
  • Will the protagonist escape?
  • Will the truth be revealed?

This question gives the screenplay direction. The twists and turns continually affect whether the audience believes the answer will be yes or no.

The hero gets closer to the goal, and yes appears possible.

A new obstacle arises, and no suddenly seems more likely.

A secret is revealed, an ally becomes an enemy, the protagonist makes a terrible mistake, or an apparent defeat creates an unexpected opportunity. Each major development changes the likelihood of the final answer.

The central question does not make a screenplay simplistic. It provides a strong foundation upon which a complex story can be built.

Why Your Screenplay Needs This Question Early

The audience does not necessarily need to hear the central question spoken aloud. However, within the first few pages, they should begin to sense what kind of story they are watching and what significant outcome they will be waiting to discover.

That does not mean everything must be explained immediately. Mystery is good. Confusion is not.

When the central question is missing or delayed too long, the screenplay can start to feel like a succession of events rather than a developing story. The protagonist goes somewhere, talks to someone, encounters a problem, and then does something else—but the reader does not understand what all these events are building toward.

Even an individually effective scene may feel less important because the reader cannot connect it to the larger narrative.

A strong central question helps the writer decide:

  • Which scenes belong in the screenplay
  • Which scenes are taking the story off course
  • Which obstacles genuinely complicate the protagonist’s journey
  • Which subplots strengthen the main story
  • What information should be revealed and when
  • Whether the ending answers the question the story originally asked

It also helps explain why a screenplay may be too long or too short.

A script can become too long because the writer keeps adding incidents that do not place meaningful pressure on the central question. A script can feel too short because the writer has not sufficiently explored the obstacles, reversals, relationships, and emotional consequences surrounding that question.

Before adding or removing pages, make sure you know what question those pages are supposed to be developing.

A Simple Example: E.T. the Extra-Terrestrial

E.T. establishes its fundamental situation very quickly: an alien has been left behind on Earth.

That creates an immediate overarching question:

Will E.T. get home?

Once Elliott discovers him, another closely connected question emerges:

Can Elliott help E.T. get home before the adults find and capture him?

The story contains friendship, family problems, loneliness, government pursuit, danger, humor, and wonder. However, those elements do not float around independently. They become connected to E.T.’s need to return home and Elliott’s growing determination to help him.

The external objective also carries an emotional cost. The more deeply Elliott loves E.T., the more painful success will become. Helping his friend go home means losing him.

That is one reason the ending is so powerful. The external question is answered, but the answer carries an emotional consequence that has been developing throughout the movie.

A central question should not merely organize the plot. At its best, it also intensifies the audience’s emotional investment.

A More Complex Example: Titanic

Now let’s take a deeper look at Titanic, because it demonstrates how a central question can develop inside a much larger story with several layers.

Titanic received 14 Academy Award nominations and won 11 Oscars, including Best Picture. That does not mean every screenwriter should imitate its structure—or its running time—but studying an exceptionally successful film can help us recognize how major storytelling elements work together. The Academy’s official record confirms its 14 nominations and 11 wins.

If we put aside the present-day wraparound and focus on the historical story aboard the ship, the central question is more complex than Will Jack and Rose end up together?

Jack and Rose have not even met when Rose first appears.

Yet Rose’s introduction immediately gives us a strong sense of the film’s direction. She arrives to board the Titanic surrounded by wealth, status, expectations, and control. From the outside, she appears to have everything. Emotionally, however, she is trapped inside a future that other people have chosen for her.

The deeper overarching question becomes:

Will Rose escape the life that has been chosen for her and claim a life of her own?

This question is not announced in one tidy sentence. It becomes visible through Rose’s behavior, her relationship with Cal, her mother’s pressure, and eventually her attempt to take her own life.

That moment makes the stakes unmistakable. Rose does not merely dislike her engagement. She feels that there is no possible escape from the life closing around her.

Then Jack Enters the Story

When Jack and Rose meet, a major personal storyline develops:

Will Jack and Rose be together?

Everything appears to be working against them. They come from radically different social classes. Rose is engaged to another man. Her mother regards the marriage as essential to their financial survival. Cal treats Rose as a possession, and Jack does not belong in their social world.

Their attraction makes yes possible, while their circumstances continually push the answer toward no.

Being with Jack also represents far more to Rose than choosing one man over another. Jack represents freedom, courage, possibility, spontaneity, and a life that belongs to her.

Through Jack, Rose begins to recognize that the future designed for her is not the only future available.

The romantic question therefore supports the larger central question. Whether Rose chooses Jack is part of whether she will choose her own life.

Then the Titanic Strikes the Iceberg

Once the ship strikes the iceberg, the central questions do not disappear. They become more urgent.

We are still wondering:

Will Jack and Rose be together?

Now, however, another question overwhelms the immediate action:

Will they survive?

The disaster places extraordinary pressure on the love story and on Rose’s transformation. Her choices are no longer theoretical. She must act with courage, reject the people who have controlled her, risk her life, and fight for the future she has only recently begun to imagine.

The iceberg does not replace the personal story. It forces that story into action.

This is an important distinction. An external event can make a screenplay more exciting, but it becomes emotionally powerful when it also tests the protagonist’s deepest internal struggle.

How Titanic Answers Its Questions

In the literal sense, the answer to Will Jack and Rose remain together? is no. Jack dies before they can share the future they imagined.

But the answer to the deeper question—Will Rose escape the life chosen for her and claim a life of her own?—is yes.

Jack awakens the part of Rose that still wants to live. She keeps her promise to survive, leaves her old identity behind, and builds the full life that once seemed impossible to her.

That creates an emotionally complex ending. The romantic relationship does not continue physically, but it accomplishes something larger. Jack’s influence becomes part of the life Rose chooses.

The movie does not merely answer a plot question. It answers a question about who Rose will become.

What Titanic Teaches Screenwriters

James Cameron is an advanced filmmaker managing an enormous number of story elements at once. The film takes longer than I would generally recommend to reveal the central romantic storyline, and some people have certainly argued that the movie is too long.

However, the story does not remain directionless while we wait for Jack and Rose to meet.

The moment Rose appears, we begin to understand her emotional confinement and the kind of struggle the story will explore. Smaller questions and immediate problems keep the narrative moving until the major relationships and dangers are fully established.

A highly experienced filmmaker can bend conventional expectations because other storytelling elements are already doing the necessary work. That is different from delaying the central question while the audience waits patiently for the story to begin.

You do not have to reveal every layer of your central question on Page 1. You should, however, give the audience an early sense of the movie’s direction.

Use the Central Question to Diagnose Your Script

If readers tell you that your screenplay drags, wanders, feels confusing, or does not hold together, write down its central dramatic question.

Try to express it in one sentence that can be answered yes or no.

If you cannot do that, the reader may not understand the direction of the story either.

Then examine every major scene, character, obstacle, and subplot. Ask:

  • Does this place pressure on the central question?
  • Does it make yes or no seem more likely?
  • Does it reveal why the outcome matters emotionally?
  • Does it change the protagonist’s ability or willingness to pursue the goal?
  • Does it create a consequence that must be addressed later?
  • Does it develop a secondary question that supports the main story?

Not every scene must address the central question in exactly the same way. That would become mechanical and predictable. But the screenplay should feel as though its various elements belong to the same developing dramatic experience.

The central question is the spine, not the entire body. Your characters, relationships, dialogue, theme, imagery, subplots, surprises, and emotional turns give the movie its distinctive life.

Without the spine, however, the other parts may have trouble standing up.

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Nothing kills a good story faster than bad dialogue.

If your screenplay dialogue is predictable, if everybody speaks in the same rhythm, or if every character basically sounds like you, that is one of the fastest ways to signal that you are a new screenwriter. Script readers notice it immediately. And once they notice it, it becomes very hard for them to unsee it.

The challenge with writing great dialogue is that it has to do several things at once. It has to sound believable. It has to communicate what the character wants to say. It has to reveal character. And it has to do all of that with just enough language, not too much.

That balance is hard. There is no magic shortcut that suddenly makes dialogue perfect. A lot of it comes from rewriting, tweaking, and pushing past your own speaking habits. But there are a few exercises that can dramatically improve screenplay dialogue because they force you out of your normal patterns.

Here are three unusual techniques that can sharpen your dialogue, plus one bonus method that is actually the most important of all.

Why dialogue so often falls flat

One of the biggest dialogue mistakes screenwriters make is writing every character in the same voice. The dialogue may technically move the story forward, but it does not feel alive because the people on the page do not sound distinct from one another.

Usually that happens because the writer is defaulting to the easiest available voice: their own.

When that happens, every line gets filtered through the same patterns of speech, the same rhythms, the same phrasing, and the same emotional logic. The result is dialogue that feels written instead of spoken.

On the other hand, when dialogue is done well, it can absolutely set you apart. Strong dialogue gets attention. It makes characters memorable. It gives a screenplay energy. So this is one of those craft areas that is worth working on constantly.

Tip #1: Cut every third or fourth word

This first exercise is simple, brutal, and surprisingly effective.

Go through your script and start cutting out every third or fourth word in your dialogue. Literally cross them out. If you have longer chunks of dialogue, you can apply the same idea by cutting every third line instead.

The point is not to create polished dialogue in one pass. The point is to force compression.

At first, what remains may not make perfect sense. That is fine. You will go back and repair it. You will naturally restore the words that are essential. But once you do that, you start to see something important:

  • How much of the original dialogue was unnecessary
  • How often characters were overexplaining
  • How much cleaner a line becomes when the extra language is gone

This is a great editing tool because it gives you a launchpad. Instead of staring at a page and wondering what to trim, you begin by trimming aggressively and then rebuild only what the scene truly needs.

That shift matters. It turns editing from a slow, painful guessing game into a much more active process. And the result is often tighter, stronger, more cinematic dialogue.

What this exercise teaches you

  • Economy: You can say more with less.
  • Clarity: The essential idea often survives without all the extra wording.
  • Confidence: Characters do not need to explain everything to be understood.

If your dialogue tends to run long, this one exercise can change the way you revise.

Tip #2: Use random word relationships

This technique is a creativity jolt.

Go to your bookshelf and pull down a novel. Open to a random page. Put two fingers down somewhere on the page and use the words you land on in the dialogue you are currently writing.

If you land on tiny functional words like “at” or “the,” skip those and choose stronger words. The point is to use meaningful language that pushes your thinking in a new direction.

Then move on to the next page of your screenplay and repeat the exercise with a different random page in the novel.

This works for a very specific reason: it interrupts your habitual language choices.

When you are writing normally, your mind reaches for the most familiar phrase, the most expected response, the most obvious wording. Random word prompts shake that up. Suddenly you have to ask yourself:

  • How could this word fit this character?
  • How could this phrase reshape the line?
  • What new emotional or imaginative angle does this create?

That kind of pressure can produce surprisingly fresh dialogue.

It also makes revision more playful. Instead of sitting there resisting the edit, you give yourself a creative challenge. That can help a lot when the work starts to feel stiff or mechanical.

Why this exercise helps screenplay dialogue

Random word relationships can:

  • Infuse stale scenes with fresh language
  • Push you toward less predictable word choices
  • Stretch your imagination
  • Make dialogue revision feel more like discovery than drudgery

You do not have to use it on every page. Even using it selectively can help you break out of repetitive patterns.

Tip #3: Mix your dialogue with a completely different genre

Another major dialogue pitfall is monotony. Not just in vocabulary, but in attitude.

If your characters keep reacting in the same emotional register, your scenes can flatten out even if the story itself is solid. One way to shake that up is to borrow energy from a completely different genre.

Here is how it works.

Take one of your characters and imagine that character speaking with the voice or spirit of someone from a very different kind of movie. Not permanently, and not as imitation for its own sake, but as a creative provocation.

For example, imagine a 12-year-old boy who wants to be a major league player. He is sitting in his bedroom, discouraged, feeling awkward and defeated. In a flat version of the scene, he might say something like, “I’m no good. How am I ever going to make it?”

Now inject the energy of a character from Braveheart. Suddenly the emotional charge changes. The voice becomes larger, bolder, more defiant. Instead of collapsing inward, the scene starts generating a different kind of life.

The point is not to turn the kid into a medieval warrior. The point is to stimulate new possibilities.

When you filter a scene through the voice of another genre, you begin to hear options you would not have found otherwise. You may discover:

  • A stronger emotional posture for the character
  • A more distinctive way of expressing determination, fear, or frustration
  • A deeper understanding of who the character is

Sometimes this kind of experiment even helps you develop the character more fully, because it reveals choices you did not know were available.

The bonus tip: Give every major character a crystal-clear voice model

This is the most important technique of all.

If all your characters sound alike, you have to solve that problem directly. And one of the strongest ways to do it is to assign each major character a specific voice reference.

Start with your main character.

Ask yourself: Who exactly do they sound like?

Not vaguely. Not “kind of sarcastic” or “sort of shy.” You need a very clear person in mind. It could be:

  • Someone you know personally
  • A movie star
  • Someone from your past
  • Anyone whose speech patterns are vivid and distinct in your mind

Then go through the entire script and rewrite only that character’s dialogue while hearing that person’s voice in your head.

What matters here is specificity. You are not just telling yourself the character is funny or reserved. You are tuning into rhythm, word choice, sentence structure, attitude, hesitation, confidence, and cadence.

Once you do that, the dialogue starts to change naturally.

The character will not end up sounding exactly like your reference person, because this is still a separate fictional person in a separate story. And eventually a different actor will bring their own performance to the role anyway. But using a specific voice model helps you break out of generic writing and gives the dialogue a much more distinct texture.

After that, repeat the same process for each major character, one by one.

Why this works so well

  • It creates contrast: Characters stop blending together.
  • It adds rhythm: Each person gets their own cadence.
  • It improves believability: The dialogue starts feeling connected to personality.
  • It reveals character: Voice becomes part of characterization, not just information delivery.

If you do only one thing to improve screenplay dialogue, this is a strong place to start.

What better dialogue really requires

There is no way around it: writing great dialogue takes work.

You have to keep revising. You have to keep listening. You have to keep training yourself to hear the difference between what is serviceable and what is truly alive on the page.

These exercises matter because they help you escape your default settings. They break up the patterns you are used to speaking in. They force you to make choices. And once those choices start showing up consistently, your dialogue gets sharper, more distinctive, and more professional.

If you apply these methods, you may be surprised by how quickly your scenes begin to improve. What once felt flat starts to develop personality. Characters begin to separate from one another. The writing gains energy.

A quick recap of the four techniques

  1. Cut every third or fourth word to force compression and reveal what is truly necessary.
  2. Use random word relationships from a novel to spark fresh, unexpected dialogue choices.
  3. Mix your dialogue with another genre to stimulate new emotional tones and character possibilities.
  4. Assign each major character a specific voice model so every character develops a distinct speech pattern and rhythm.

If your screenplay dialogue needs work, start there. These are unusual methods, yes, but they are practical. And more importantly, they can produce real breakthroughs.

Keep pushing. Keep rewriting. Keep training your ear. Dialogue is one of the most powerful tools you have as a screenwriter, and when you learn to use it well, it absolutely shows.

Stop Fighting Your Software and Start Writing Your Story: Why Pro Script Typing is the Secret Weapon

Writing a screenplay takes an enormous amount of creative juice. You’re already juggling character arcs, pacing, and dialogue that doesn’t sound like a cardboard box. In a perfect world, 100% of your time would be spent making your story “Oscar-ready.”

But in the real world? Too many writers spend half their day fighting with margins, chasing rogue dialogue blocks, and Googling “how to format a montage in 2026.”

Just when you’re in the flow, the technical gremlins strike. Suddenly, your creative energy isn’t going into your script—it’s going into a battle with a software update. This is the #1 reason smart writers use a screenplay typing service. We handle the “busy work” so you can get back to the “brain work.”

The “Barrier to Entry”: Why New Writers Can’t Wing It

If you’re new to the game, formatting can feel like a secret language. You might have a great handle on the basics, but there are always those “gray area” moments that leave you guessing.

Here’s the cold, hard truth: Producers and agents are looking for any excuse to put a script down. If your formatting looks “off,” they immediately assume the writing is off, too. It’s like the first gate in a series of obstacles. You want them to look at your page and think, “This person is a pro.” It doesn’t have to be “high school English teacher” perfect, but it has to have the right look and feel. Bad formatting screams “amateur,” and in Hollywood, that’s a one-way ticket to the recycle bin.

For the Pros: Dusting Off the Gems

If you’re an experienced writer, you know the drill—but you also know your time is money. At Smart Girls Productions, we work with long-haul pros in a few key ways:

  • The “Legacy” Update: You have a brilliant script from 15 or 20 years ago sitting in a drawer (or an old file format). You want to polish it, but first, it needs to be keyed into Final Draft and brought up to current industry standards.
  • The “Trend” Check: Industry standards have changed significantly in the last decade. Formatting has become more streamlined and “cleaner.” If your script looks like it was typed in 1998, it feels dated before they read the first line.
  • The Human Connection: In this era of “digital black holes,” Smart Girls is the modern version of the old Barbara’s Place at Universal. You can actually pick up the phone and talk to a human being about your script. No bots, no “support tickets,” just real help.

The “Small” Problems That Are Actually Huge Headaches

I’ve seen the same formatting nightmares pop up for 30 years. They seem small, but they kill your momentum:

  • Dialogue blocks that slowly drift out of alignment.
  • Action paragraphs that look like a dense wall of text.
  • The “Mystery Gap”: When half a page is blank for no reason.
  • The Microsoft Word Trap: Let’s be real—trying to format a screenplay in Word is a form of torture. Word wasn’t built for this, and it will betray you at 2:00 AM.

Poor formatting is like watching a movie where the audio is half a second out of sync. It’s distracting, it’s annoying, and it pulls the reader out of your world.

From Raw Scrawls to Polished Pages

Not everyone starts with a tidy draft. Think of a typing service as your Writer’s Assistant. You provide the raw material; we provide the professional structure. Some common situations we handle:

The “Hard Copy” Rescue: You have an old printed script that isn’t on a computer at all. We can get that into a digital, editable format.

The PDF Locked-Box: You have a PDF that needs to be put back into Final Draft so you can actually work on it again.

Handwritten pages (yes, writers still do those and we still help with them)!

The Hybrid Draft: A story written in Word or a “treatment-meets-script” document.

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Use your time to write your story and develop your characters, not hassle with formatting issues.

The Bottom Line: Peace of Mind

The biggest benefit of outsourcing your script typing? Peace of mind. You shouldn’t be worrying about whether your scene headings are consistent or if your page breaks are legal. You should be worrying about whether your protagonist’s choice in Act II is earned.

Whether you’re a newcomer or a seasoned vet, our goal is to give you a clean, contemporary, and professional “slate” so you can do what you do best.

Ready to get your story out of the “technical weeds” and onto the page? Check out our Script Typing page for details or call me directly at 818-907-6511 for a quote to get your script ready to roll. Let’s get to work!

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Your First Screenplay: A Beginner’s Guide to Actually Finishing It

Have you written a rough draft of your screenplay but feel uncertain aout whether you are on the right track? This guide gives first-time screenwriters a clear, practical roadmap to shape their script into something solid. Screenwriting can feel like wrangling smoke—exciting, mysterious, and nearly impossible to control. But if you’ve got a story to tell, this guide will walk you through the essentials of how to get it out of your head and onto the page. Whether you’re dreaming up your first short film or diving into your debut feature, these steps will help you write smarter, not harder. No jargon. No fluff. Just a real-world roadmap to your first completed screenplay.

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Start with a Killer Logline

Before you write a single scene, test your idea with a logline—a one-sentence summary that captures your plot, main character, conflict, and tone. If you can’t boil your idea down to a sentence, it may not be ready yet. A strong logline is like a lighthouse: it keeps you from getting lost in the fog of rewrites. Example: “A grieving teenager discovers a portal to a parallel world where her brother never died—but the price of staying there may be her own life.” Tip: Don’t settle for your first version. Try 3–5 variations to uncover the strongest angle.

Nail Down the Story Beats

Once you’ve nailed the premise, outline your key story moments. You don’t need a rigid structure—just a few high points to guide your momentum.
  • Opening Image: How your story begins, visually.
  • Turning Point: What changes everything for your lead character?
  • Midpoint: A major revelation or reversal.
  • Climax: The moment of truth or confrontation.
  • Resolution: The new normal or fallout.
Use sticky notes, spreadsheets, napkins—whatever helps you get the bones down. This step can save you from wandering aimlessly for 60 pages.

Format Like a Pro (Even If You’re a Rookie)

Screenplay formatting isn’t optional—it’s a professional language. If your script looks wrong, it won’t be read. Fortunately, modern software takes care of most of it.
  • Scene Headings: INT. or EXT., location, and time of day
  • Action Lines: Present tense, visual descriptions
  • Character Cues: Name centered above dialogue
  • Dialogue: Speak clearly, write concisely
  • Transitions: Optional—CUT TO:, DISSOLVE TO:
Recommended tools: Final Draft, Highland, Fade In, WriterDuet. Even Google Docs with a template can get the job done in a pinch.

Bridge the Gap with a Scriptment

Not ready to jump into a fully formatted script? Use what some people now refer to as a “scriptment”—kind of a dorky name, but functional because it’s a hybrid between an outline and a screenplay. It lets you mix rough action lines with bits of dialogue and ideas without pressure. Think of it as a sketch before the painting. So you can describe a lot of the action, then put dialogue in where you know what you want your characters to say and so on. It’s not just a Treatment, not just the script, it’s filling in where you want to… but getting the whole story on to the page. Example: “Lena walks into the old diner—sees a figure in the back booth. (Still not sure who this will be. Maybe her estranged mom?) They sit in silence. Tension brews.” Scriptments help you stay fluid and experimental. Don’t skip this if your perfectionism tends to kill momentum.

Write the Messy First Draft

Your goal here isn’t brilliance—it’s completion. Focus on getting the story out without overthinking. You’ll fix awkward dialogue and pacing later.
  • Show, Don’t Tell: Let actions and images reveal truth.
  • Enter Late, Exit Early: Cut the fluff. Start where it matters.
  • Keep Moving: If you get stuck, write “Something cool happens here” and keep going.
Remember: a bad page can be revised. A blank one can’t.

Refine Your Core Concept

Sometimes writers rush to outline before their core idea is solid. Take time to ask hard questions:
  • Why this story? Why now?
  • Who’s the audience?
  • What emotional engine is driving the plot?
The stronger your “why,” the stronger your script. Use brainstorming, journaling, or even voice memos to deepen your idea before committing to structure.

Choose the Right Feedback

Not all feedback is created equal. Your script is a newborn—don’t hand it to someone who’s only going to point out the weird ears. Look for readers who:
  • Understand the craft
  • Have taste similar to yours
  • Give specific notes, not vague opinions
Better yet, give them a short feedback form. Ask about clarity, pacing, characters, and tone. That keeps responses focused and helpful.

Master the Art of Rewriting

The magic happens in revision. This is where your scenes get tighter, your characters deepen, and your voice sharpens. Take a break before re-reading. Then come back as a reader, not a writer. If something feels off, it probably is. Get curious. Rewrite boldly. Quote to remember: “The first draft is you telling the story to yourself. The rewrite is you telling it to the world.”

FAQ for First-Time Screenwriters

Q: What’s the best software to use? A: Final Draft is the industry standard, but Highland and Fade In are great alternatives. Use whatever helps you stay focused on the writing. Q: How long should my script be? A: Feature scripts typically range from 90 to 120 pages. Short films can be anywhere from 2 to 30 pages. Q: Do I need to copyright my script? A: It’s smart to register it with the WGA or the U.S. Copyright Office before sending it out, just in case. Q: Can I sell a script without an agent? A: Yes, but it’s harder. Start with contests, networking events, or services like my Genre Genie list-building package to target producers directly.

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The term “branding” is often misunderstood by actors, not because it’s their fault, but because it’s bandied around by people who don’t actually understand the broader marketing principle it arises from.

Actors are often led to believe that their “brand” is something they have to dream up or figure out or choose out of a million possibilites. Or vice versa, they think they have an “implicit brand” that they just need to discover, and they set out on a mission to find out what it is but they’re never quite certain if they’ve found “it.” But that’s not how it works.

From a marketing perspective, there’s no way around having a brand or being branded. Like it or not. Although consummate and famous actors like Meryl Streep don’t all actively set out to brand themselves, the fact is they offer a brand. That brand is what makes them famous. They are like McDonald’s in that whether they are the best or not doesn’t matter…. audiences know (and like) what they will get when they go to see a movie that actor is in. With Meryl Streep, you know you will get a consummate performance of anything she does, and typically an accent of some sort. Some people like her and some people don’t.

One of the things that makes an actor famous is that people — individuals who watch their performance — love “something” about that particular actor. That something which they love is an aspect of that actor’s branding.
 
For producers, directors and others who hire them, there’s a star actor’s type and demographic description, but there’s also that star’s reputation — another part of their branding, which makes the industry pros want to or not want to work with them.
 
Bottomline… branding is inescapable if you want to be a known talent — known by the industry or the viewing audience. It’s simply inescapable.
 
The confusion most often lies in understanding how an actor’s brand arises and comes into being for a given talent. In reality, it emerges as an agreement from both sides — the actor and the audience. Who does the actor present themselves as and who does the audience see them as or buy them as? As long as the two come together… you have a starting point for a brand. Marilyn Monroe, case in point.
 
Early on, however, the most important thing for actors (after becoming a strong actor) is to understand as fully as possible what type you are, what unique quality you bring to the table, and then to amplify that to make a stronger impression…. thus creating a stronger brand that is authentic and unique to you.

The most common complaint I hear from actors about “show business” is that the business side is frustrating. Most actors would prefer focusing on their acting versus marketing. And although it’s understandable, the “business” is an important part of show business. Many times I’ve witnessed actors succeeding mainly because of what was accomplished on the business side.

The fact is that pretty much every artist and every business could say that they would rather do what they do rather than market and promote themselves.

I’m sure Wal-Mart execs would rather have customers just show up and buy stuff than spend hundreds of millions of dollars on marketing to get them there.

But the reality is that marketing and promotion is a fact of business, and your acting career is no different.

As an actor, you need to come up with a marketing and promotion plan just like any other business.

When you have something to talk about, go on and promote it endlessly.

If you don’t have something in particular to promote, re-purpose announcements for things you’ve done in the past.

Promoting yourself is a way to stay “top-of-mind” with casting directors and everyone else.

Get your headshot and name in front of all of the agents, managers, casting directors, producers, directors, fans… anyone you can who can help you move forward.

A publicist will try to get you in People magazine or other such publications so that others start to say, “Who’s that girl?  Or good-looking guy?”  That’s all marketing and promotion.

The main thing is that you always need to be marketing and promoting yourself.

Marketing and promoting your acting career should be a way of life for you.

Doing a one-off promotion is better than doing nothing at all, but having an ongoing plan is even better.

Don’t feel badly if you don’t have one right now, because only about 1 in 5,000 actors do (my wild guess)!  But when you come up with your plan and stick to it, you will start to see results, and you can modify it as needed.

If you don’t have one, you will be wandering aimlessly and just hoping something happens.  Don’t wander aimlessly.  Create a plan to market and promote yourself continually.

If you want help creating a plan that is right for you, call the Smart Girls / How To Hollywood office at 818/907-6511.

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